does it rain where you are?
the sky has teeth
dreams are thieves they
steal my sleep
they steal my breath
"Across the desert lies the promised land."
Every few years, I randomly check DA, read your poems and remember just how fantastic your words are!
An economical piece of writing, fixing a state of mind in vivid language, As good as expected, Shane
I loved the first few lines. I have a special affinity for teeth, it seems.
With so lttle wors...nice
Loved it. The end is my favorite but the flow is completely on point - makes it hard to decide where the beginning really ends and the end really begins
A couple of my fave lines from "Willy Wonka and the Chocolate Factory" (the title and description). R.I.P. Gene Wilder.