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twice the Texas theme songs... by `YouInventedMe:iconYouInventedMe:



the goal of the satisfied self
is ultimately a textbook definition
based solely on intimate knowledge
and personal detail

it's a little bit
spatial relations
and a little bit
based on heartbeat

one thing
leading the next to water
driving it to drink
and watching
in growing horror
as the future becomes incapacitated

it's life
and I can relate

I've been accosted by greeks
in underground streets
to star in short films
that were nonsensical
at best and
outright diabolical
when put in context

I'm putting miles between sentences

oh
if only
every heart
I once held
could (please)
put in an appearance
©2006-2010 `YouInventedMe
:iconyouinventedme:

Author's Comments

the stars at night
are big & bright
CLAPCLAPCLAP


Full Title: twice the Texas theme songs, in half the time


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road poem

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:iconfallenstar731:
Very good, love the way this one was done.
:icondiejuliet:
:) I'd put a few full stops in it just 'cause the way I read it sounded like it needed some, but I liked it, specially the way the rhythym changes in the middle.

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[get off my pink nail varnish bitch]
:iconmsjordison:
pretty,

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~*Beautiful Through The Scars*~

:sadangel:
:iconyouinventedme:
thank you


xo!

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one half of *ZombiesAteUs
:iconyouinventedme:
thanks very much


xo!

--
one half of *ZombiesAteUs
:iconthetaoofchaos:
"I'm putting miles between sentences"

yup, dat's texas awrite!

;)

--
The world is an eraser for these words


- Jack Kerouac


we must destroy that which contains us
:iconthexxxrust:
I am really loving all of the 'road poems!'

Great work, as always

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Are you suggesting coconuts migrate?
:iconwh0rem0ans:
I like this. It feels like it made a leap in the middle when I was not watching.

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Be careful when thou art casting out demons, thou dost not allow the casting out of the best parts of thyself.

Clarissa Pinkola Estes

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