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tumultuous time unhanded by *YouInventedMe:iconYouInventedMe:



torn between
the pages
of life
and death
wondering
how the next
sentence
will read

adrift
amidst
the rift
where words
wait

'til tired

lips
let slip
some secret
unsealed fate

submitting
an omission
of forgotten
thoughts
forgetting
to think about
the time lost

measurement's a
pretense precious
seconds are a
cost

fingers ticking
increments
of moments
not counted
because
time accounts
for nothing
:iconyouinventedme:

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:iconvertigoart:

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hold that thought 'til I get caught up.

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:iconvertigoart:
this turned out wonderfully :)

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:iconyouinventedme:
:highfive:

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an antique arms and armor expert
:iconoldest-boy:
"submitting
an omission
of forgotten
thoughts"

:D

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'SHARKS DON'T SLEEP' a collection of poems by Eric Hamilton.
:iconyouinventedme:
:) that's all will

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an antique arms and armor expert
:iconoldest-boy:
that phrase alone
says a lot for me.

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'SHARKS DON'T SLEEP' a collection of poems by Eric Hamilton.
:iconyouinventedme:
I feel ya, cuz.

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an antique arms and armor expert
:iconoldest-boy:
;)

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'SHARKS DON'T SLEEP' a collection of poems by Eric Hamilton.
:iconkitty-princess:
seconds are a
cost

I like that bit. By the time I made it down that far I was reading it fast.
:iconstarlightandpoison:
so wonderful. and what a fantastic title. <3

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i believe that my life's gonna see,
the love i give return to me.
:iconspashleylove:
Amazingly wonderful! :)

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"I'm in love with a girl I hate,
She enjoys pointing out every bad thing about me,
I'm in love with a critic and a skeptic,
I'd trad her, I'd trade her in a second"


*~*~*~*~She's a Lady, Forever the Sickest Kids~*~*~*~*

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