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the fall of my glued-on horn by *YouInventedMe:iconYouInventedMe:



how I long
for past pretending
in an everlasting glow
some fast approaching
cavalry engraved
in an image
to my liking

truth is
I can't find my own tone
truth is
your breast beats
(chest breathes)
best for none
you're wonderful
and I'm not the one
truth is
you'll see my skin
retired

some new
kind
and kind of
stranger
sings my songs now
unheard

your heart & hands
immersed in other craft
shaping your precious silence
closed throat
and sometimes-static
all wide-eyed
with wounds
innocent of bleeding

truth is
creeping under covers
truth is form is
where you find it
made of the best
in unsaid words
truth is
there's no joy
in forced rewinding

I'm for
everything
forever
and you're
forever
everything
©2008-2009 *YouInventedMe
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I'm for
everything
forever
and you're
forever
everything
I love how you played with the words.

--
If there's nothing nice to say don't say anything at all
-Thumper

If this was true the world would be speechless
It aches...makes me think of Crown Of Love, Arcade Fire...i carved
your name across my eyelids, you pray for rain, i pray for blindness.
:clap:

--
"U and I don't need PERMISSION to be UNIFIED" - Lisa (lefteye) Lopes
this tugs at me.
it's so lovely.

--
wish i had a socket-set to dismantle this morning.
and just one pair of clean socks.
and a photo of you.
:heart:
"some fast approaching
cavalry engraved
in an image
to my liking" specifically

loved it all

--
Kilroy was here
thank you very much

xo!

--
I am a poetry admin for *DailyLitDeviations.

interested in collaborating?
writer, photographer, painter, whatever(er) -
I'll mix with words with anything you've got.
:bulletred: currently on collab hiatus
thank you

xo!

--
I am a poetry admin for *DailyLitDeviations.

interested in collaborating?
writer, photographer, painter, whatever(er) -
I'll mix with words with anything you've got.
:bulletred: currently on collab hiatus
:D

xo!

--
I am a poetry admin for *DailyLitDeviations.

interested in collaborating?
writer, photographer, painter, whatever(er) -
I'll mix with words with anything you've got.
:bulletred: currently on collab hiatus

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