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swing low, sweet Roswell... by *YouInventedMe:iconYouInventedMe:



hundreds of dollars
two southern cops
and a border patrol search
later

we found ourselves
setting up
for the big shakedown

armed with wide eyes
and dulled wits
we were ready
for anything

even the ever encroaching desert
arid & alluring
as some sun-baked siren
sweetly singing of half-remembered promises
and unfulfilled madness

the true american dream

betting it all on red
white
and black
while muttering incantations about
father's latest footwear
and being thrown out of only
the finest places

all hands on deck
for the most triumphant
distress signal
ever
heard
©2006-2009 *YouInventedMe
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Full Title: swing low, sweet Roswell (Vegas interlude)


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road poem

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:iconmarkhighpriestess:
Intruging piece.

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Writing from those voices in my head

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:iconfallenstar731:
Awesome, very nice writing.
:icondavid-parr:
:) very interesting

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:iconyouinventedme:
thank you


xo!

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an antique arms and armor expert
:iconyouinventedme:
thanks a lot


xo!

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an antique arms and armor expert
:iconyouinventedme:
thank you very much


xo!

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an antique arms and armor expert
:iconmarkhighpriestess:
welcome

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Writing from those voices in my head

Member of *HostClub!
:iconlovestruck-x:
even the ever encroaching desert
arid & alluring
as some sun-baked siren
sweetly singing of half-remembered promises
and unfulfilled madness

that was amazing.
no doubt about ittt. ;]
:iconthroughangelseyes7:
possibly my favorite roadpoem so far.

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I have a pocket sun boy
I\'m everything that burns in you...
:iconr-mitchell:
the imagery in this is gorgeous :)

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