who struck the right chord
in your
synthesized
night of the soul
and barreled down
black tunnels
carrying color?
human
building
fearful of
the inner workings
of your body
hopeful
ruin
life
as evidenced
by shadows

who struck the right chord in your synthesized night of the soul and barreled down black tunnels carrying color? human building fearful of the inner workings of your body hopeful ruin life as evidenced by shadows |
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it's lovely <3
Great poem.
You always paint really lovely images very well <3
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I like the words Smashing, Golly, Gosh, Corking,Cracking and Soliloquy.
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building
fearful of
the inner workings
of your body
hopeful
ruin
Hello Kitty returns!
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an antique arms and armor expert
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an antique arms and armor expert
nice preview image.
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Band geek and proud of it!
(Do illiterate people get the full effect of Alphabet soup?)
All those who believe in telekinesis, raise my hand.
Smile, and the world will smile with you. Laugh and they'll all think you're on drugs.
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an antique arms and armor expert
But
"chimney-brain"
That's just fucking amazing.
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You're no scarlet prim proper rose
Sing me your pretty prose
Lips pressed nose to nose
Legs entwined with twenty toes.
I love this poem. Very resonant and musical, in a metallic, echoing sort of way. The last stanza is perfect.
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an antique arms and armor expert
and yes
that's me
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an antique arms and armor expert
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