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I want you
in the dark
watching
stars
fall

not balancing
the distance
between
another arm's
embrace

I want you
on the hard ground
in the middle
of the lake

my hips' width
pressed
against your
length

[our sitting
setting
center stage]

I want you
in so many appropriate
inappropriate
ways

I
can't
help

I want us
all
entangled limbs

lost (in) ourselves
:iconyouinventedme:

Author's Comments

"I'm a good guy for a gal
so won't you look my palm over?
I've got time for a chat
so won't you tell me my future?

I'm going to break down at fifty
and I'm not quite a stallion
I'm a good guy for a gal
and I'm mentally slipping"

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:iconsatah:
"not balancing
the distance
between
another arm's
embrace"

and

"lost (in) ourselves"
♥♥

--
rosin your bow, sing your scales

do your lunges

we're going
field-
dancing
:icongraphicqueen91:
something different than usual, but every bit as good as always. i like this supremely.

--
“Like rain on a cold window, these thoughts pattered against the hard surface of the incontrovertible truth.” - J.K. Rowling

"It is easier to fight for one's principles than to live up to them." - Alfred Adler
:iconthimblebostitch:
mmm i love your mind.

--
You better come clean because your friend just spilled the beans.
:iconyouinventedme:
:heart:

--
an antique arms and armor expert
:iconyouinventedme:
:)

--
an antique arms and armor expert
:iconyouinventedme:
:D much obliged

--
an antique arms and armor expert
:iconyouinventedme:
:smooch:

--
an antique arms and armor expert
:iconolobocanta:
i especially like the rhyme in this part

"I want you
on the hard ground
in the middle
of the lake

my hips' width
pressed
against your
length"

a very dark poem...well done :>
:iconthetaoofchaos:
"I want you
on the hard ground
in the middle
of the lake"

like a small fantasy island

:heart:

--
The world is an eraser for these words


- Jack Kerouac


we must destroy that which contains us

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