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scratch and sniff... by `YouInventedMe:iconYouInventedMe:



I will not be
the end of my
blood-
line
(set aside)
trickle down
genetics featuring
double helix
split

consider this
a hole-in-your-
theory
and my
condom/
consciousness
conundrum
shifts

our gift-
wrapped
(in you)
and all
that
(you do)
strewn about
in strands
too soon
to stray

a time-
less
blueprint
for short shrift
exits and
cut-snip-
slap-cry
future interplay

life's birthed
rehearsed
your code is
a curse
we'll see who
laughs last
and bursts
first
©2009-2010 `YouInventedMe
:iconyouinventedme:

Author's Comments

I'm quite happy to present another collab with, your friend & mine,
:iconoldest-boy:

(please) check out his gallery!

also, here is the alternate version of our collab.
if you like it better, head on over to his gallery later and he should have it up for you to fave there.

scratch and sniff (finger) paint.

consider this
a hole in your theory
and my condom/
consciousness
conundrum
shifts

our gift-
wrapped
(in you)
and all
that
(you do)
strewn about
in strands
too soon
to stray

a time-
less
blueprint
for short shrift
exits and
cut-snip-
slap-cry
future interplay-
place

life's birthed
and over-
rehearsed
we'll see who
laughs last
and bursts
first

Comments


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:iconstarlightandpoison:
i really enjoy them both, another fantastic collab!

--
i believe that my life's gonna see,
the love i give return to me.
:iconitsxmagik:
I absolutely love this. :heart:

our gift-
wrapped
(in you)
and all
that
(you do)
strewn about
in strands
too soon
to stray

:clap:


--
make a map of what you see; direct pain effectively.
:iconpseudometry:
I think this is actually my favourite collab yet. Seamless mixing of both of you, wonderful flow and tone.

--
'Beauty will save the world'
--Fyodor Dostoevsky
:iconpaulcarlton:
sweet! concept is right on. :lol:

--
"Reason is nothing less then the guardian of love." Sam Harris - The End of Faith
:icongarnet-43:
"trickle down genetics" :giggle:

I love it!

Most enjoyable.

--
"And the day came when the risk to remain tight in a bud was more painful than the risk it took to blossom." - Anais Nin
:iconshewroteverse:
consider this
a hole-in-your-
theory
and my
condom/
consciousness


love it.

--
yes, i have been known to delude myself.
:iconoldest-boy:
word.

--
'SHARKS DON'T SLEEP' a collection of poems by Eric Hamilton.
:iconoldest-boy:
always a pleasure working with you.

--
'SHARKS DON'T SLEEP' a collection of poems by Eric Hamilton.
:iconvertigoart:
:clap: another great job.

--
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My Book:
Poetic Visions of an Uncut Mind: [link]

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