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call:
offhandedly on an off chance
I tried to picture your face and
all I could conjure with my
mental wizardry was a fan
blowing in an empty room,
a color patch and a bit
of lace where you used to
hang that little cross to ward off
"demons" or so you used to joke
when serious you said it reminded
you of your poor dead grandma
but the way you clutched it
at night I think the joke was
(if not more honest) more truthful
maybe you were fearful of being
buried, and well, I’ve finally done it baby
response:
(some oft remembered yesterday)
the shape of your hands
almost perfect grace and
full of purpose
breathing life back into us
like the good/bad old days
crouch like a fever over me
feelings you'd forgotten
when the mood would match your purpose
time is fleeting, fleeing, & telling
and your skeleton (all smiling)
matched the heart-shape in your skin
something worth reliving
like a song sung strictly spirit (or)
a hope I never hoped
call & response:
offhandedly on an off chance (some oft remember remembered yesterday)
I tried to picture your face and the shape of your hands
all I could conjure with my almost perfect grace and
mental wizardry was a fan full of purpose
blowing in an empty room, breathing life back into us
a color patch and a bit like the good/bad old days
of lace where you used to crouch like a fever over me
hang that little cross to ward off feelings you'd forgotten
"demons" or so you used to joke when the mood would match your purpose
when serious you said it reminded time is fleeting, fleeing, & telling
you of your poor dead grandma and your skeleton (all smiling)
but the way you clutched it matched the heart-shape in your skin
at night I think the joke was something worth reliving
(if not more honest) more truthful like a song sung strictly spirit (or)
maybe you were fearful of being a hope I never hoped
buried, and well, I've finally done it baby
offhandedly on an off chance
I tried to picture your face and
all I could conjure with my
mental wizardry was a fan
blowing in an empty room,
a color patch and a bit
of lace where you used to
hang that little cross to ward off
"demons" or so you used to joke
when serious you said it reminded
you of your poor dead grandma
but the way you clutched it
at night I think the joke was
(if not more honest) more truthful
maybe you were fearful of being
buried, and well, I’ve finally done it baby
response:
(some oft remembered yesterday)
the shape of your hands
almost perfect grace and
full of purpose
breathing life back into us
like the good/bad old days
crouch like a fever over me
feelings you'd forgotten
when the mood would match your purpose
time is fleeting, fleeing, & telling
and your skeleton (all smiling)
matched the heart-shape in your skin
something worth reliving
like a song sung strictly spirit (or)
a hope I never hoped
call & response:
offhandedly on an off chance (some oft remember remembered yesterday)
I tried to picture your face and the shape of your hands
all I could conjure with my almost perfect grace and
mental wizardry was a fan full of purpose
blowing in an empty room, breathing life back into us
a color patch and a bit like the good/bad old days
of lace where you used to crouch like a fever over me
hang that little cross to ward off feelings you'd forgotten
"demons" or so you used to joke when the mood would match your purpose
when serious you said it reminded time is fleeting, fleeing, & telling
you of your poor dead grandma and your skeleton (all smiling)
but the way you clutched it matched the heart-shape in your skin
at night I think the joke was something worth reliving
(if not more honest) more truthful like a song sung strictly spirit (or)
maybe you were fearful of being a hope I never hoped
buried, and well, I've finally done it baby
Literature
inPersonals
I've been known to bring strong
men to their knees
and leave them there.
Call me thursday night - I'll be laying in the bathtub,
candlelit with the makings for a pipe
bomb. I like to make explosive
Literature
but you are more...
you pick roses from the garden
with your bare hands because you
like seeing the blood. it makes you feel
alive. you wipe your hands on your
jeans and you tell your parents
it was a mistake, an accident, and you
are so sorry. but youve always
been a good liar, havent you?
its an art, you say, and youve
got it down. its a shame -
you dont really want to be
an artist, but you are.
the world is so fucking jealous
of the talents you dont even want.
God, theyve ruined you,
havent they? theyve spit on
your heart and theyve
ripped out your hair and said
youre t
Literature
Ramblings
For everything that someone else has gone through
I'm sure that something "worse" has happened to you
I bet you'd take the time to care
But it might just be too much to do
And I know if you slit your wrists
You'd only do it to be missed
But the only someone who would
Would be the someone who's ass you kissed
I wish you'd hear what I have to say
But you've never listened anyway
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Heh, it's so weird reading this piece again. To be honest, I don't like it any better now than I did then, in particular my section (overly wordy and contains a laughable non-sequitur) and the combined section (fragmented and dense, and thus overly difficult to read). It's not terrible, but I think we can definitely do a whole lot better. Of course, you're always balls deep in with some other artist, but when you're free sometime in the next decade or so we should try it again.