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:iconyouinventedme:

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"Sometimes I get so lonely
I forget what day it is,
and how to spell my name."


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edit: not one, but two, people noticed, within the last 12 hours, that I had an extra syllable in the last line of the original version. my thanks for the heads up and corrections suggestions.

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:iconennuiiunne:
Wonderful haiku.

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I don't kiss the lines with rhythm and rhyme the way I used to.
I write with a feather sword in my own blood.
:iconyouinventedme:
thank you very much

xo!

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one half of *ZombiesAteUs
:iconmolchansky:
:hug:

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sleeping is the best way to make the day go away.
when i get to the bridge i will burn it.
:iconplayacardzright:
ashamed for feeling? huh... :?

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"U and I don't need PERMISSION to be UNIFIED" - Lisa (lefteye) Lopes
:iconcolacandy:
i understand :)

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I don't listen to what art critics say. I don't know anybody who needs a critic to find out what art is.
:iconstarlightandpoison:
ooh yes.

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wish i had a socket-set to dismantle this morning.
and just one pair of clean socks.
and a photo of you.
:icony0urstalker:
tell me if you ever do, 'kay?

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:iconb1gfan:
a soul-aching lament done in sparse style ^_^
:icono0amphigory0o:
Woww Really great and sad. =[
:iconpraytell:
you know the club has really nice jackets, right? :)

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