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questioning people

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Literature Text

your DNA remembers
caves AND stars
(bronzed pulse
skittish pulsars)

we're space starved

graced ungrateful
faith unfaithful
flesh postcards

comets recomposed
we're heaven knows
you're ancient history


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tinkered with: 01.21.19
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andyending's avatar
This is pure brilliance. I love it. We're space starved, we're heaven knows. Like. Like... Like! :heart: 
I'm lost for words. This piece feels slightly random, as in disorganised, but instead of it falling apart it reveals these thin threads that you've spun that - for now - I can see but not understand. If that makes any sense at all. It's like you've written so much between the lines that I don't necessarily need to see/read in order to see it or understand it. Really love this piece.
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P.S. I make no sense. I'm sorry for that. But I really do love this piece.