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lies like love
like mystery

it was (your jigsaw face)
falling
to
pieces

that helped me (put it together)
with a question mark
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crookd-bullet Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh the imagery <3
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YouInventedMe Featured By Owner May 27, 2013   Writer
<3
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neonxaos Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Is the question mark a late addition?
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YouInventedMe Featured By Owner May 17, 2013   Writer
no, sir.
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Clair Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013
Evidence of how we need each other- of how we really are connected. Separate but part of the same progression. This is lovely- thank you for sharing!
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YouInventedMe Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013   Writer
Much obliged.
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o0Amphigory0o Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013
I faved this a while ago but after reading it again I just want to comment. This is such an intriguing piece, I love how, at first glance, it seems simple, but upon further inspection you notice all of the double meanings, way things connect (the parenthesis make their own 'poem', without the parenthesis make another 'poem', etc), it's fascinating. Love the thought and emotion in this, great!
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YouInventedMe Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013   Writer
thank you, my dear. very much appreciated.
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dygariad Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"your jigsaw face"...
i love that line so much.
Beautiful as always! :')
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YouInventedMe Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013   Writer
thanks very much
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