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pick a catchphrase, die alone by *YouInventedMe:iconYouInventedMe:



attention all skeletons:

announce your exit!
act affected!

find yourself fixed
in new flesh
less them guts
you spill
to spell grit
finely faked

clamp the new bit
between teeth
worn smooth
still repeating
"every star
must die
to shine"
half-believing

you're so proud
to be bursting
have such high hopes
for haunting
with your yesterdays
like paper ghosts
who merely moan
to move the room

but I am not buying
these dear
diary entries
love poorly conceived
quickly lost
(with a twist!)

manufactured
plastic moments
wrapped in
fabricated magic
poems with all
the aching heart
of a grocery list
©2008-2009 *YouInventedMe
:iconyouinventedme:

Author's Comments

your snow don't stick

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:iconreduxed:
Bwaha, is That so?
Next time:
We will be sure!
to add
more block cheese on
your sandwiches
and forget!
the bread altogether
(unless! it's wonderbrand)
because
we're underfunded
as it is

- Lunch ladies


[By the by, superb diction and an excellent reminder.]
:iconyouinventedme:
oh, you lovely lunch ladies
(and sir messengers of such)

much obliged


xo!

--
an antique arms and armor expert
:iconoldest-boy:
very well done,

Sums up my feelings toward 97% of the poets I know.

"your snow don't stick"

:clap:

--
'SHARKS DON'T SLEEP' a collection of poems by Eric Hamilton.
:iconyouinventedme:
thank ya much

I wonder in which
percent my snow
falls

xo!

--
an antique arms and armor expert
:iconcrashhooligan:
good job. the beginning does a good job of grabbing attention. i like this quite a lot, but i almost wish you could work the description into it too! and i hope i don't fit into this category. i mean, what? i'm not paranoid.
:iconoldest-boy:
the 3, my good man,

however, Am i to believe my poems
have gone sour for you
like milk in the refrigerators
of abondonned apartments?


I've longed for the approval
from such collegues as yourself.

--
'SHARKS DON'T SLEEP' a collection of poems by Eric Hamilton.
:iconnightgrid:
ouchies. this piece makes me horribly sad, especially:
"every star
must die
to shine
half-believing".

Articulate as always. I do enjoy your slivers of soul-honesty, little windows...
I hope you are well, Shane.
:iconyouinventedme:
thanks

I have no internet
and have not been able to
check anyone's poems
lately

additionally
no worries
yours shall never go sour


xo!

--
an antique arms and armor expert
:iconyouinventedme:
thanks very much

you're not at all
the type I had in mind
:heart:


xo!

--
an antique arms and armor expert
:iconyouinventedme:
:hug: thanks very much

I am mostly well
and I hope you
are more so


xo!

--
an antique arms and armor expert

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