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some folks are just birthed cursed

brains born busy
tossin' thoughts
across
the circumference of
the earth

the nights
eat up their
lives
like they're
just desserts

that one-third
fraction spent
questioning
the other two-thirds'
worth

and what
dreams can work
and which
mean to hurt
seem to get
reversed
we get lost

between god

and the dirt

worship
at the church
of frantic
'til inert
the last

a large part

of the first
©2009-2010 `YouInventedMe
:iconyouinventedme:

Author's Comments

"just another f word
from the weakest
in the herd

I will wolf you"

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:iconosiristhrasher06:
some folks are just birthed cursed

brains born busy
tossin' thoughts
across
the circumference of
the earth


god damn, your diction is spot-on.
fantastic.

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If you like it, suggest it for a Daily Deviation! :D
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:iconyouinventedme:
people are all up on my diction

--
one half of *ZombiesAteUs
:iconalecbell:
the nights
eat up their
lives
like they're
just desserts

Contender for Pun of the Year? I'll nominate you!

A great poem, Shane.

--
There's always a better poem just out of reach.

Words create situations [link]

The roots of the future run deep [link]
:iconyouinventedme:
as I am a big fan
of the properly placed
pun (especially since puns
are always out of fashion),
so I accept your nomination
with great pride.

thanks, alec!

--
one half of *ZombiesAteUs
:icontigereverskin:
keep rollin', son. :heart:

--
“why do writers write? because it isn't there.”
—thomas berger

“no honest poet can ever feel quite sure of the permanent value of what he has written: he may have wasted his time and messed up his life for nothing.”
—ts eliot
:iconosiristhrasher06:
hahah
probably the best response you could have given.
touche, sir.

--
If you like it, suggest it for a Daily Deviation! :D
dA is for the literary arts, too.
:iconthetaoofchaos:
"worship
at the church
of frantic
'til inert"

pow!!! right there.

--
The world is an eraser for these words


- Jack Kerouac


we must destroy that which contains us
:iconvelocity07:
:clap: I applaud you for this. XD
:iconyouinventedme:
I'm a faithful member
of that congregation.

--
one half of *ZombiesAteUs

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