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my own private briar patch by `YouInventedMe:iconYouInventedMe:



your brother was
once a wolf
whimsically
shredding skin
to shape
your smile

while some small
scurrying creature
spoke of hearts
and borrowed imagination
(before burrowing
to safety)

you
you were a deer
in the face of hunters

your widened eyes
once breathed
salt & smoke
’til insides released
like birds
from someone’s ceiling

while long-eared lapin
confused & laughing
applauding an almost empty room
(should have) exclaimed
"don’t do the bleeding
for the both of us!"

you
you were a ghost
making jokes about demise

your years
once collected & described
became a lifetime
still
change was never promised
to the both of us

while I’m the same
sorry rabbit
shivering
in the tall grass
(eyes aglow
with admiration)

you
you are a bear
©2008-2010 `YouInventedMe
:iconyouinventedme:

Author's Comments

"she can return you the face
that you are staring from"

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:iconcakeprophet:
Awesome. This is the best, I think.

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This is the way the world ends, not with a bang, but a whimper.
:icontoume:
I like this. It sort of makes me homesick, in a way that I can't fully describe.

But it tugs at me, like a memory I used to know.

Brilliant.

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. . . I'm a train wreck of awesome . . .
:iconlasagnabomb:
ROOOOAAARRR

i am done hibernating

--
Sometimes I've believed as many as six impossible things before breakfast.
:iconkiwibri:
Its different. It really is. Its not as abstract as your other pieces, but it still maintains an abstract aspect.

It feels kind of seperate from you though. It doesn't really seem the same. I dont know how to describe it.

Either way, whatever you write is gorgeous no matter what form it may be in :)

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:bulletpink::bulletred::bulletorange::bulletyellow::bulletgreen::bulletblue::bulletpurple:
"Where the Spirit does not Work with the Hand there is No Art" -Da Vinci
:iconyouinventedme:
this pleases me


xo!

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one half of *ZombiesAteUs
:iconyouinventedme:
beautiful comment

thanks

xo!

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one half of *ZombiesAteUs
:iconyouinventedme:
much obliged, sir

xo!

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one half of *ZombiesAteUs
:iconyouinventedme:
thank you

it's easily one of my favorite things
I've ever scribbled

xo!

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one half of *ZombiesAteUs
:iconriencuran:
I think this is my favorite of yours so far =)

--
A purpose of human life, no matter who is controlling it, is to love whoever is around to be loved.
-Kurt Vonnegut
:iconyouinventedme:
very kind of you to say
thanks

xo!

--
one half of *ZombiesAteUs

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