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I now prefer
my beauty
nameless
so I can quake
and curse fate
blameless
bereft
of the burden
of discovery

avoiding left by
almost alright with
anonymity

see

once you learn
to love
it's like
riding a bike
and it seems
I never met a liar
that I didn't like
and/or
I love you's
not a sentence
that lasts
for life
or perhaps
(and this
possibility

just occurred
to me)

there's a sort of
painful
parole
obtained through
perjury

so

what's a boy
to fear
when fear's not
what it appears
to be?

how to
intuit an intent
when purpose is
a question
in perpetuity?
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who wrote the book of love
and threw it at them

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love 3 3 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconthetaoofchaos:
*thetaoofchaos Oct 27, 2009, 7:49:52 AM
"I love you's
not a sentence
that lasts
for life
or perhaps
(and this
possibility

just occurred
to me)

there's a sort of
painful
parole
obtained through
perjury"

man, that explodes in my head.

:heart:

--
The world is an eraser for these words


- Jack Kerouac


we must destroy that which contains us
:iconstylusmodern:
~Stylusmodern Oct 27, 2009, 8:10:58 AM
I now prefer
my beauty
nameless
so I can quake
and curse fate
blameless
bereft
of the burden
of discovery

avoiding left by
almost alright with
anonymity

i love this-- you make it look easy, my friend.
:iconvertigoart:
=VertigoArt Oct 27, 2009, 9:06:26 AM
once you learn
to love
it's like
riding a bike

wonderful.

--
Creator of =DailyLitDeviations

My Book:
Poetic Visions of an Uncut Mind: [link]
:iconcaroncecilia:
=CaronCecilia Oct 27, 2009, 9:51:01 AM
epic win, love...

--
~Those talked over oft times make the best writers.
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yeah, I'm one of those "I really like this, good job!" critics. So sue me...
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:iconotherwise-duck:
~otherwise-duck Oct 27, 2009, 10:30:29 AM
plus star.

plus love.
:iconxnm907:
~XNM907 Oct 27, 2009, 11:27:22 AM
Sort of song like. Of course, from what I've read, a lot of your work would translate well if put to music, but that's just my opinion. :aww:

--
Whisper in my ear the silly things I need to hear.
:iconleurindal:
*Leurindal Oct 27, 2009, 12:48:34 PM
I liked the drift in the entire poem, but what really really got me was the depth and validity of the ending's question :heart:

--
"Beauty is truth, truth beauty," - that is all
Ye know on earth, and all ye need to know.

J. Keats
:iconsocially-suicidal:
~Socially-Suicidal Oct 27, 2009, 2:33:29 PM
:O it's magical, that's so interesting... neat job

--
You are
Everything.

You make me
(empty.)

Proud member of rawem0tion: [link]
:iconvertigeaux:
=vertigeaux Oct 27, 2009, 3:06:37 PM
I love the rhythm to this. It's great to read out loud.

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