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letter from the edited by *YouInventedMe:iconYouInventedMe:



dear world

I'm working on words
we'll both find
worth it

and a soul for any occasion
©2006-2009 *YouInventedMe
:iconyouinventedme:

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road poem

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:iconlelekelley:
Sounds like a great start, or maybe it is just supposed to make you think.

Either way I really like it.

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=lelekelley :smooch: :heart: :glomp: ~Velerin

This crazy girl
with heart too big


Founder =WeCritique
:icontakenoko:
Mm, yes. Very thought-provoking. I like the alliteration :D

"and a soul for any occasion" reminds me of advertisements, like the way they say "balloons for any occasion" or "shoes for any occasion." ^^
:iconpinocchio-liez:
What can I say...this piece is brilliant! Short...concise...and yet so much is said in this little amount of time that you have...as you say! Brilliant piece...absolutely brilliant!

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May God help me if I ever have to use my art...:blackrose:
:iconhunnybunny09:
I think this is perfect as is,
definately gets the message across.

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"Peace is the only battle worth waging." - Albert Camus (1913-1960)
:iconluminousmoon:
I love how it says so much with so little, and makes you feel like you miss something, because when you're short on time, you most always do^-^

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We make for your sake such things as stand fast,
Through the ages these pages forever will last.
On blank paper the printer sets down what is heard,
Giving life to what's rife with the power of the word. -Michael Kongehl
:iconfallenstar731:
Very short, very good...strange how you can write something so short and still write it so well.
:iconholdingbacktears:
Gloriously done. :clap:

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--Emo happens--

"Just because I'm not sticking it in there doesn't mean I don't think its beautiful." - Adam Lambert
:iconstarlightandpoison:
beautiful. <3

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i believe that my life's gonna see,
the love i give return to me.
:iconultimateoutlaw:
Concise excellence. Pro and win.

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"What is life? It is the flash of a firefly in the night. It is the breath of a buffalo in the wintertime. It is the little shadow which runs across the grass and loses itself in the sunset." Crowfoot, Blackfoot warrior and orator 1830 - 1890
:iconarliddian:
I like the alliteration and your title is great. This is a gem. :)

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[Philippians 1:21]

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