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add a hundred miles
for every year
between us

find the day
when I can say
that's your best smile

maybe time's just a compass
(and an arrow's accomplice)

and all it's accomplished
is pointing
the way
for a while
for :iconrefallath:
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similar-singularity Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2016
this is so tumbling, what a treat :heart:
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:iconyouinventedme:
YouInventedMe Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2016   Writer
Kind of you to say. I love tumbling words myself.
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Themis-Kali Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014
I may have to ask if I can steal parts of your 2 paragraphs on this; it's really pulling at something in me and I rather like it!
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:iconyouinventedme:
YouInventedMe Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014   Writer
Sorry for the very delayed response, but have at it.
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spoems Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013   Writer
Great musicality, as per usual. 
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:iconyouinventedme:
YouInventedMe Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013   Writer
Thanks, alsoShane.
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sceneecupcake Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013
Beautiful and painful, something I think I feel often. Especially the hundred miles for each year. Living far from the ones you love is hard; not seeing or speaking, even harder.
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:iconyouinventedme:
YouInventedMe Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013   Writer
Agreed. Thank you.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
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:iconyouinventedme:
YouInventedMe Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013   Writer
thanks very much.
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nighttimebeautiful Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013   Writer
from beginning to finish i love this,
especially that smooth and sweet little rhyme in there.
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:iconyouinventedme:
YouInventedMe Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013   Writer
much obliged.
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LNIN9 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013  Hobbyist
always a pleasure
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:iconyouinventedme:
YouInventedMe Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013   Writer
thanks, Luke. good to hear from you!
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:iconvalgeronk:
valgeronk Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013
i simply love your work, this one is no exception.
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:iconyouinventedme:
YouInventedMe Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013   Writer
thanks very much!
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:iconrunnrabbitrunn:
RUNNrabbitRUNN Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013
after even a year of being mia, i still do come round looking for your work.
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:iconyouinventedme:
YouInventedMe Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013   Writer
much appreciated. thank you! nice to hear from you!
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:iconrunnrabbitrunn:
RUNNrabbitRUNN Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013
sure,:)
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AlecBell Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013
Words as tame as performing great cats!
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:iconyouinventedme:
YouInventedMe Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013   Writer
ROAR!
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AlecBell Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013
They haven't got out of the cage, I hope!
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lesaira Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013  Hobbyist
Those last four lines just get to me. You have certainly raised some interesting questions about time.

After time has finished pointing the way, then what?
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:iconyouinventedme:
YouInventedMe Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013   Writer
I'm hoping to find out soon.
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:iconlesaira:
lesaira Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013  Hobbyist
I don't know, I almost don't want to find out.
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seafishandstarfire Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013
this is absolutely stunning! 

i will be thinking about these words all day today, i just know it.
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:iconyouinventedme:
YouInventedMe Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013   Writer
Thanks very much.
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Refallath Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013
Can I just sit and chew on these words forever and ever and ever?

(I like you)
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:iconyouinventedme:
YouInventedMe Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013   Writer
Yes, please. <3
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