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who spoke
in the broke
gravel tones
informed
by
the gray streets
of america

and perched
in pauses
blown across
photos
of former wind

framed & faded
restless dead

eyes closed to the night

to build a better black
a deeper darkness
©2009-2010 `YouInventedMe
:iconyouinventedme:

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road poem 4-3

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:iconstylusmodern:
ahhhhhh shivers.

I like this one a lot.
:iconla-quinn:
I simply adore your style, I got goosebumps :)

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Reality is restricted, dreams are boundless
:iconpoisonedapple312:
very interesting view point I like it!

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"If we could live without passion, maybe we'd know some kind of peace, but we would be hollow: empty rooms, shuttered and dank - without passion, we'd be truly dead"~ angel from season 2 of buffy

*DailyLitDeviations
:iconyouinventedme:
thanks, love.

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one half of *ZombiesAteUs
:iconyouinventedme:
much obliged.

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one half of *ZombiesAteUs
:iconyouinventedme:
thanks a lot.

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one half of *ZombiesAteUs
:iconpoisonedapple312:
anytime it was well done

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"If we could live without passion, maybe we'd know some kind of peace, but we would be hollow: empty rooms, shuttered and dank - without passion, we'd be truly dead"~ angel from season 2 of buffy

*DailyLitDeviations
:iconstitched-patchez:
Fascinating! I love it!

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...and that sad part is, all of it was true!
:iconyouinventedme:
thanks very much

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one half of *ZombiesAteUs
:iconholdingbacktears:
I REALLY like the imagery in this one. :)
Nice job! :clap:

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--Emo happens--

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