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find one real bit of feeling by *YouInventedMe:iconYouInventedMe:



do me a favor
no more love, no more later
this time, just stay gone
©2008-2009 *YouInventedMe
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with sugar on top

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:iconieatmoon:
good just the way it be

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poetry is for fags
:iconmissunderstand:
Ouch.
Sucks to be your muse.

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I'm not going to ask you to,
but it would be nice,
if my gallery had visit from you.
:iconpixil8ed:
I laughed when I read this, just because it is so imminently familiar. I swear, the way guys and girls fuck each other over in this world...

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Life is an endless wake.
:iconrafaella-schumann:
Oh my....thats meh!!!! :excited:

Im gonna use it somewhere :paranoid:

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"But,O my sweet,what labour is't to leave
The thing we have not,mastering what not strives,
Playing the place which did no form receive,
Playing patient sports in unconstrained gyves?"
(A Lover's Complain-William Shakespeare)

R.S.
:icongiggidy-03:
nice how you fit it into a haiku
Good job man
:iconmasa-chan:
OMG! I definitely read this at the right instant in my life.
If only they would stay gone. At least, from my heart.

Now, my eyes are all on fire and such, and I love you for posting this.
A balm for an grazed soul.

Thank you...! :heart:

+fav

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Cuckuhim 'o 'ab him.
Wepeghim 'o 'abai him.
:iconitsxmagik:
Wow, yes.
I love your short poems.
:glomp:


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make a map of what you see; direct pain effectively.

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