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everyday, every night, all... by *YouInventedMe:iconYouInventedMe:



in preparing a heart
for the vast expanses of america
be sure to schedule disappointments early
so as to leave endings
open
for bitter defeat

be a firm believer
in the healing power of laughter
this makes trying to stifle
the unavoidable giggles that occur
when considering the irony
of your own demise
a lot more fun

we're making
failure romantic again

we're taking
what we're giving
and completing the circle
with ourselves

when truly taking the time
to find yourself
be sure you've filled out
the proper forms

you'd hate to find yourself
angry or
worse yet
falling asleep

eyes blurry
and just one more line to go

it's something like infinity
(...dot...dot...dot)

if it's enough to make you angry
it's enough to make you
it's enough
and
it all comes down
to proper planning
©2005-2009 *YouInventedMe
:iconyouinventedme:

Author's Comments

Full Title: everyday, every night, all right (traveler's prologue)


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road poem

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:iconjothar:
:thumbsup: I like this one. It appears more open freestyle, but the message is fantastic. I like your use of punctuation, especially at the end. Although you could turn this into a piece of irony by leaving off a few letters on the last word.....maybe. But that's not the message you were trying to convey, was it?

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It's not what we do for a living that makes us who we are.....it's what we do to live that does.
:iconfallenstar731:
That's beautiful...wow...
:iconmarkhighpriestess:
Superb. Incredible. Well done!

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Writing from those voices in my head

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:iconcolacandy:
iam a firm believer in the healing power of laughter,

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I don't listen to what art critics say. I don't know anybody who needs a critic to find out what art is.
:iconyouinventedme:
agreed

a close second to love

xo!

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an antique arms and armor expert
:iconcolacandy:
love what is love

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I don't listen to what art critics say. I don't know anybody who needs a critic to find out what art is.
:iconyouinventedme:
love is everything

xo!

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an antique arms and armor expert
:iconyouinventedme:
indeed

thank you


xo!

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an antique arms and armor expert
:iconyouinventedme:
thanks very much


xo!

--
an antique arms and armor expert
:iconyouinventedme:
much obliged


xo!

--
an antique arms and armor expert

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