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eskimo movies at the... by `YouInventedMe:iconYouInventedMe:



oh, I see.

she wants a steady hand, and smooth script
stretching towards infinity.
she wants those wanton words
wrapped in needless syllables.
she wants what she wants. what she wants
is not this.

not my short & stumbling text; one word
tumbling towards the next. not these
scribbled, sloppy secrets; chopped up
and half-confessed. she'd much rather view
a ten-cent vocabulary flexed...

but I digress.

my hopeless,
broken english
speaks volumes.

mostly, it talks about me.

sometimes, it says "hey!
we're doing new & exciting things
with heartbreak,
down here."

sometimes, it just
screams
and screams
and screams
and screams -

'til someone comes
running.

sometimes,
(busted & beautiful)
it exclaims & explains.
it enlightens
and entertains!

yeah,

sometimes...

but, mostly,
it doesn't.
©2009-2010 `YouInventedMe
:iconyouinventedme:

Author's Comments

"I watched
myself through your eyes -
I hated what I saw"


feel free to play 'guess that title reference'


Full Title: eskimo movies at the saint school

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:iconejectionletter:
sometimes, it just
screams
and screams
and screams
and screams -


oh, ah! i love your
effortless
endless
poetry.
:iconout-of-spite:
I could never guess the title lol

but the poem reminds me of how I felt one day when I took time to really reflect on how I was.

In other words, it rally hits home - HARD
:heart:

--
~*~We Survive What We Can't Change~*~
:blackrose:Regrets are mistakes you don't learn from:blackrose:
Surrender to the Truth: [link]
Believe the Lie: [link]
:iconyouinventedme:
thank you, dear


xo!

--
one half of *ZombiesAteUs
:iconyouinventedme:
:heart: thanks very much


xo!

--
one half of *ZombiesAteUs
:iconstarlightandpoison:
omgzwonderful.

--
i believe that my life's gonna see,
the love i give return to me.
:iconyouinventedme:
:D thank you


xo!

--
one half of *ZombiesAteUs
:iconitsxmagik:
not my short & stumbling text; one word
tumbling towards the next. not these
scribbled, sloppy secrets; chopped up
and half-confessed. she'd much rather view
a ten-cent vocabulary flexed...


but I digress.


I really love that part.
Fantastic writing, once again!


--
make a map of what you see; direct pain effectively.
:iconyouinventedme:
thank you :)


xo!

--
one half of *ZombiesAteUs
:iconitsxmagik:
My pleasure. ^^

--
make a map of what you see; direct pain effectively.
:icongiggidy-03:
a speech well crafted, good sir.

my hopeless,
broken english
speaks volumes.
(nicely done)


p.s. I think a 't' needs to been inserted between "hear" & "break"

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