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earth worms by *YouInventedMe:iconYouInventedMe:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Spiritual > Open


he has built
our hearts
but he has
failed to fill
our hearts and
so they
swallow up
the dark which
devours every part
it passes
through

tell me

do you
know the
name of the
sparrow who
consumes you?
©2009 *YouInventedMe
:iconyouinventedme:

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pyschopomp & circumstance

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:iconyouinventedme:
*YouInventedMe Jun 1, 2009, 10:15:09 AM
:D

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an antique arms and armor expert
:icongedwaylem:
~gedwaylem Jun 1, 2009, 10:29:50 AM
ah, perfectly enfolded and flowing. the question forming a full stop shifting to ellipse in a simultaneous way.
*tips hat*

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"millions long for immortality who do not know what to do with themselves on a rainy sunday afternoon." -susan ertz
:iconthetaoofchaos:
*thetaoofchaos Jun 1, 2009, 10:33:17 AM
wonderful - sounds like an ancient bridgetroll riddle.

me likes

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The world is an eraser for these words


- Jack Kerouac


we must destroy that which contains us
:iconyouinventedme:
*YouInventedMe Jun 1, 2009, 10:34:45 AM
who's that trip trappin on my bridge?

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an antique arms and armor expert
:iconyouinventedme:
*YouInventedMe Jun 1, 2009, 10:34:49 AM
:smooch:

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an antique arms and armor expert
:iconosiristhrasher06:
=Osiristhrasher06 Jun 1, 2009, 10:37:50 AM
the brevity of each line makes this piece even more exciting.

awesome!

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:iconyouinventedme:
*YouInventedMe Jun 1, 2009, 10:39:26 AM
thank ya much

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an antique arms and armor expert
:iconposhlost:
~poshlost Jun 1, 2009, 10:58:56 AM
Fascinating. I think the bit about the dark could be a slightly better parallel, but regardless it's a brilliant piece.

J

--
"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris.
Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."
- Catullus
:iconyouinventedme:
*YouInventedMe Jun 1, 2009, 11:11:56 AM
much obliged

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an antique arms and armor expert
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