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dear moon, I am your tide. by *YouInventedMe:iconYouInventedMe:





the weight
your heart holds
is you

(bones
breath
and otherwise)
your unfocused form
waves
receding

I'd drink deep
and dream large
lay long
unslept nights
unashamed
with only skylines
to
cover me

(see self
as sea)
star lit
shore swept
and all
points between
framed
like faith
for those
you're swallowing
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Submitted: April 18
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this was a collaboration with one of my favorite
photographers on deviantart
:iconmoeandcherrycoke:

the poem was written by me to accompany
the photo she took

(please) check out her gallery!


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*praytell:iconpraytell: Apr 18, 2008, 5:55:45 PM
ebb and flo, to and fro

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=playacardzright:iconplayacardzright: Apr 18, 2008, 6:59:45 PM
very lovely;)

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A GOOD MAN KEEPS AN EVEN "BETTER WOMAN", AND ONE DAY I WILL BE HER!! :blowkiss:
*b1gfan:iconb1gfan: Apr 18, 2008, 7:22:18 PM Mood: Joy
to and fro it goes
~y0urstalker:icony0urstalker: Apr 18, 2008, 9:25:06 PM
You give me hope,
and I might touch you,
if I could just fly higher,
I might follow through.
And then I fall, and crash, and scatter,
turning hope into a thousand droplets,
frothy white to bring the tide,
rising, I am unlimited, till the hour you set.
And you watch me hope to reach you.

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~KiwiBri:iconKiwiBri: Apr 19, 2008, 8:52:01 AM
oooh. Very nice. Flowy and smooth :D
*thumbs up*

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*YouInventedMe:iconYouInventedMe: Apr 19, 2008, 4:34:08 PM
indeed

xo!

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writer, photographer, painter, whatever(er) -
I'll mix with words with anything you've got.
*YouInventedMe:iconYouInventedMe: Apr 19, 2008, 4:34:17 PM
thank you

xo!

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writer, photographer, painter, whatever(er) -
I'll mix with words with anything you've got.
*YouInventedMe:iconYouInventedMe: Apr 19, 2008, 4:35:27 PM
:D

xo!

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writer, photographer, painter, whatever(er) -
I'll mix with words with anything you've got.
*YouInventedMe:iconYouInventedMe: Apr 19, 2008, 4:35:40 PM
beautiful

thanks

xo!

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interested in collaborating?
writer, photographer, painter, whatever(er) -
I'll mix with words with anything you've got.