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codename: integrity by *YouInventedMe:iconYouInventedMe:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


love
is telling someone
a bedtime story
and I'm on
stand-by
while the words fly out

it's doubt
what taps its
fingers
most times
how
happiness
sits best
in silence

but
oh!
what an accepting
exception
(you are)
a strange
and wonderful breed

spinning in circles
placing yourself
everywhere
©2008 *YouInventedMe
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"she had a weakness for writers
and I
I was never that good
with the words anyways"

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~ChildHoodLover:iconChildHoodLover: May 6, 2008, 4:17:18 PM
:clap:

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92% of teens would be dead if Abercrombie & Fitch said it wasn't cool to breathe. Put this in your sig if you are part of the 8% that would be laughing.
*YouInventedMe:iconYouInventedMe: May 6, 2008, 4:18:34 PM
:D thanks

xo!

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interested in collaborating?
writer, photographer, painter, whatever(er) -
I'll mix with words with anything you've got.
*LeonieSainteVire:iconLeonieSainteVire: May 6, 2008, 4:18:52 PM
I do not know who "she" is...but if she did not recognize your talent with words...she was/is not a worthy critic!

I love this!

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"I need no warrant for being, and no word of sanction upon my being. I am the warrant and the sanction."-Ayn Rand
~cries-of-the-past:iconcries-of-the-past: May 6, 2008, 4:22:08 PM
:)
i love the ending

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If the world didn't suck, we would all fall off.
*YouInventedMe:iconYouInventedMe: May 6, 2008, 4:24:59 PM
thank you very much

she actually likes my words
better than I do

that quote is from a lucero song
and just my self-doubt peeking out

xo!

--
interested in collaborating?
writer, photographer, painter, whatever(er) -
I'll mix with words with anything you've got.
*YouInventedMe:iconYouInventedMe: May 6, 2008, 4:25:31 PM
thanks a lot, miss

xo!

--
interested in collaborating?
writer, photographer, painter, whatever(er) -
I'll mix with words with anything you've got.
~iheartabortions:iconiheartabortions: May 6, 2008, 4:30:39 PM
love love love

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ohsnapp.
~eun-mi:iconeun-mi: May 6, 2008, 4:40:20 PM
absolutely brilliant, but that's not surprising :)

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Can I even complicate your breathing?
I guess I'm just your average girl.
*YouInventedMe:iconYouInventedMe: May 6, 2008, 4:46:33 PM
thanks a lot

xo!

--
interested in collaborating?
writer, photographer, painter, whatever(er) -
I'll mix with words with anything you've got.
*YouInventedMe:iconYouInventedMe: May 6, 2008, 4:47:20 PM
thank you very much

xo!

--
interested in collaborating?
writer, photographer, painter, whatever(er) -
I'll mix with words with anything you've got.
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