love, I let you
linger on
in places yet unseen
in the silent space
between
initial sparks
and how we're wired
my
dear, you are
discovered in
every memory undeparted
every poem I've ever
started
even haunting
odd synapses fired
I
fear, forever
following
a hand unclasped (still shaken)
a heart unheard until it's
taken
time to rest
uncommon sense retired
why
it's my
attempt
to ingest
starshine
'til admired!
it's my
intent
to become
all you
have desired.














Comments
I wish you the best of luck!
I really enjoy how you broke apart the stanzas in the middle of the lines - it catches attention and makes you finish reading it.
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~*~We Survive What We Can't Change~*~
Surrender to the Truth: [link]
Believe the Lie: [link]
I don't think it's really a
competition, as much as it's
a prompt to get you writing...
more of a challenge against yourself, I suppose
haha
xo!
--
an antique arms and armor expert
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A baby seal walks into a club.
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=SixbySix
xo!
--
an antique arms and armor expert
xo!
--
an antique arms and armor expert
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"In dreams emotions are overwhelming."
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i like to
put haikus where they
don't belong.
xo!
--
an antique arms and armor expert
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