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dear damage,

how you radiate...
a secret
sad song drifting
to some unsuspecting ears

enclosed
please find my heart
(beaten)

its annual
emotional
investment
as always
ill-conceived
and poorly executed:

time misspent
with all
dearly departed
resources
misappropriated

sincerely,
old
dogged
and
learning to breathe new air
©2008-2009 *YouInventedMe
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this makes me smile:
'its annual
emotional
investment
as always
ill-conceived
and poorly executed'

:)

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The state is nothing but an instrument of oppression of one class by another--no less so in a democratic republic than in a monarchy.
Friedrich Engels


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anytime....

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The state is nothing but an instrument of oppression of one class by another--no less so in a democratic republic than in a monarchy.
Friedrich Engels


My Gallery is [link]
I like the concept and the way you've executed this one, nicely done! :)
DOGGED

pants.

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Sometimes I've believed as many as six impossible things before breakfast.
mmm, very nice. I'm liking it a lot :D
I agree, this ones a bit different though. It seems the middle stanza grabs at you more than the last.

Not bad, just different. :D great job as always :)

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"Where the Spirit does not Work with the Hand there is No Art" -Da Vinci
"if you wanna get girls
maybe you oughtta start
wearing pants"

"pant, eh? I'll try it."

xo!
perhaps because the last stanza
is a signature?

thanks

xo!

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