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To The Edge... by *YouInventedMe:iconYouInventedMe:



should this earth
end
we'll simply
build another
(traced
from the notes
her hands have touched)
made fine
like letters
to a future
lover

and it's a white
I'll covet
coat & cover
in a light
like her name
born
blue
and for
each other

see
she dreamed
destiny
and new worlds
to discover
'til my tongue's
tilted axis
spun new words
which
to stutter

a space
where stars
seem to bloom
only
to sputter
to be replaced
with her face
another universe
recovered

...and I guess you could call it an odyssey
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I wrote this poem because my new friend
:iconsangheiliaine:
asked me to accompany
this [link]

as the picture is unlike anything I'd worked with before
I decided to ditch my usual style and try something
(at least slightly) different

and
there you have it

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*LNIN9:iconLNIN9: 6 days 17 hours ago
beautiful shane...well done..

--
It hurts to find out that what you wanted doesn't match what you dreamed it would be.
Randy K. Milholland
*YouInventedMe:iconYouInventedMe: 6 days 17 hours ago
thank you very much, sir

xo!

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interested in collaborating?
writer, photographer, painter, whatever(er) -
I'll mix with words with anything you've got.
~unicornwar:iconunicornwar: 6 days 16 hours ago
my mouth against yours.
*YouInventedMe:iconYouInventedMe: 6 days 16 hours ago
always.

xo!

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interested in collaborating?
writer, photographer, painter, whatever(er) -
I'll mix with words with anything you've got.
*starlightANDpoison:iconstarlightANDpoison: 6 days 13 hours ago
lovely. works will with the image or alone.

--
wish i had a socket-set to dismantle this morning.
and just one pair of clean socks.
and a photo of you.
*YouInventedMe:iconYouInventedMe: 6 days 13 hours ago
thanks a lot

xo!

--
interested in collaborating?
writer, photographer, painter, whatever(er) -
I'll mix with words with anything you've got.
~Molchansky:iconMolchansky: 6 days 12 hours ago
beautiful

--
sleeping is the best way to make the day go away.
when i get to the bridge i will burn it.
*YouInventedMe:iconYouInventedMe: 6 days 12 hours ago
thank you very much

xo!

--
interested in collaborating?
writer, photographer, painter, whatever(er) -
I'll mix with words with anything you've got.
~y0urstalker:icony0urstalker: 6 days 9 hours ago
it reminds me of the realm of Patricia A. Mckillip and the magic that goes on within

--
Lemme say one thing real quick... and that is, "SNAFU!!!!!!!!"
*LeonieSainteVire:iconLeonieSainteVire: 6 days 9 hours ago
Just beautiful...

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"I need no warrant for being, and no word of sanction upon my being. I am the warrant and the sanction."-Ayn Rand