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Surveying the World

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hubert was a quiet man
in love with quiet things
the cricket-hum
of summertime
the soft rain every spring

the differing dance of snowflakes
(no two falling
looked the same)
the way a rushing river seemed
to murmur out his name

the faint
audible magic
of a well meant
whispered wish
the warm under-
water greeting
of a fish
meeting a fish

and when
confronted with
rough frequencies
his fragile ears
just couldn't take
he'd sidestep the whirring world
with a quick trip to the lake

atop a tiny private island
mountain-hid from public view
he rejoiced in
the nearly
silent sound
of his heart
as it grew
I'm quite pleased to present this collab with the terrific
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she took the photo
and I wrote the poem

you can view the original image here: [link]

(please) check out her gallery!

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Asherel-Lev's avatar
Sweet and great poem.