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hubert was a quiet man
in love with quiet things
the cricket-hum
of summertime
the soft rain every spring

the differing dance of snowflakes
(no two falling
looked the same)
the way a rushing river seemed
to murmur out his name

the faint
audible magic
of a well meant
whispered wish
the warm under-
water greeting
of a fish
meeting a fish

and when
confronted with
rough frequencies
his fragile ears
just couldn't take
he'd sidestep the whirring world
with a quick trip to the lake

atop a tiny private island
mountain-hid from public view
he rejoiced in
the nearly
silent sound
of his heart
as it grew
:iconyouinventedme:

Author's Comments

I'm quite pleased to present this collab with the terrific
:iconreachthetop:

she took the photo
and I wrote the poem

you can view the original image here: [link]

(please) check out her gallery!

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interested in collaborating?
hold that thought 'til I get caught up.

Comments


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:iconiampoetry:
O, quite a lovely read, and insight. The second stanza stands out to me.

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Poetry is truly boundless. It is my passion, I am the canvas.
--
my poetry, lemon
both bitter and tart
you decide the taste of my art

©iampoetry
:icon3-degrees:
oh wow! is the the one you mentioned (somewhere, journal maybe?) that you were very excited about!?

FISH MEETING A FISH!!! I shivered! I shivered :XD: "the faint audible magic of a well-meant whispered wish" actually really touched me... i think it sums up my day today (yes it's been a good one!) and the wording captures the simply joy of it.

tiny private island moutain!! oh my gosh. i feel fit to burst at that image! who is this beautiful hubert and when can i meet him :giggle:

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"my knee is still shaking like i was twelve"
:iconyouinventedme:
:) thanks very much.

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an antique arms and armor expert
:iconyouinventedme:
:D thanks a lot

this is one of the two collabs
I mentioned recently, in my journal.

keep your eyes peeled for the next.

--
an antique arms and armor expert
:icongetyourgrip:
sagnoaegnowegjoweahg
something different,
and very very good from you, Shane.
I love it~

--
Married to the pen,
and we're both having an affair
with the page.
:iconyouinventedme:
thanks, vincenzo.
it's fun to try these more
straightforward rhyming pieces
every now & again.

--
an antique arms and armor expert
:iconheartmaker:
Such a lovely workthat provides a feeling of peace and tranquility.
Deeply thouching -
especially the last stanza.

--
A baby seal walks into a club.
:iconyouinventedme:
thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!!!!

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an antique arms and armor expert
:iconeun-mi:
i wish i could be like hubert.
excellent job, as usual
especially the second-from-last and second-from-first stanzas.


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"Tired with all these, from these would I be gone, Save that, to die, I leave my love alone."
-Shakespeare Sonnet 66
:iconmcnorris:
Oh my GoD! This is my most favorite of all my favorites of your work! Your imagination and originality and creativity are amazing. The poetry you come out with just by another picture...it is truly inspiring. You are so unique and deeply gifted! I couldn't love this anymore! :glomp: :cuddle: :love: :hug: :faint: :blowkiss:

--
"keep on rockin in the free world"-Neil Young

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