In your arms, I come undone.
Unraveling right in front of your eyes.
An ice statue melting to the ground -
A puddle spreading to your feet.
The steadying sound of whispered resolve
And never mind the might-have-beens.
You're a last chance taken, just in time.
I'm all hope in unrepeating.
My jaded eyes
Have sulked over the likes of you.
Still, I took the chance - again.
I leaped (albeit wearily).
Only time will tell, as the adage goes.
Yet, in times like these
Only prescient aptitude can pacify.
Read: I’ll be a nervous wreck indefinitely.
©2008-2009 *YouInventedMe
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