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Florida is making plans... by *YouInventedMe:iconYouInventedMe:



we could shape the words
however we wanted

(we were young
and running off
heart to mouth)

but for all intents & purposes
it was goodbye

it's a mixed bag of depressing
to think of throwing away entire lives
in boxes
and bits
of brokendown furniture

not to confuse purpose
with possessions
it's just that
memories have a way
of soaking through skin

(animate
and inanimate
alike)

we're all four walls
with stories to tell

this is the sorrow
and separation
the last sleepless night
in a hollowed out home

we now conclude our broadcast lives
©2006-2009 *YouInventedMe
:iconyouinventedme:

Author's Comments

Full Title: Florida is making plans to sink


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road poem

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:iconatragicwaste:
that's perfect. :)

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Artrocks Gallery
-Melly Bunny-
:iconfallenstar731:
That's really really beautiful. You probably know this already but you are an AWESOME poet.
:iconyouinventedme:
thank you VERY much.

xo!
:iconyouinventedme:
thanks, love.
we still need to work on a project together.

xo!
:iconatragicwaste:
and that is very true.

--
Artrocks Gallery
-Melly Bunny-
:iconatragicwaste:
IM me: KillMePlwease.

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Artrocks Gallery
-Melly Bunny-
:iconmarkhighpriestess:
Amazing.

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Writing from those voices in my head

Member of *HostClub!
:iconjothar:
Gives me a melancholy feeling that just will not budge. You're good. :thumbsup:

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It's not what we do for a living that makes us who we are.....it's what we do to live that does.
:iconyouinventedme:
thank ya much


xo!

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an antique arms and armor expert
:iconyouinventedme:
thanks a lot


xo!

--
an antique arms and armor expert

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