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I big bang
my muffled drum
wound tight
in pitch
imperfect skin

shade the day
in grays
and greens
and ever present
blue

and I split
each coming
morning
mourning nights
gone (on)
too long

shaping my sore
songs from
tongue-touched
dream-ground
teeth

my roots betrayed

by the crumbling
earth beneath

the sound is
making strangers
of acquaintances
:iconyouinventedme:

Author's Comments

:icondatene: + :iconyouinventedme:

he took the photo
I accompanied it with a poem

you can view the original image here: [link]

(please) check out his gallery!


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interested in collaborating?
hold that thought 'til I get caught up.

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:iconmoondrunk:
the last stanza's magical

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"My little old man and I fell out;
I'll tell you what 'twas all about,--
I had money and he had none,
And that's the way the noise begun."
:iconyouinventedme:
thank you, sir

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an antique arms and armor expert
:icondatene:
Amazing, great job!

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Adventure is just one mistake away
:iconyouinventedme:
thanks again for letting me write to your photo

--
an antique arms and armor expert
:icongedwaylem:
ah, this has such lovely hues and suggested textures and movement.
im most fond.

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"millions long for immortality who do not know what to do with themselves on a rainy sunday afternoon." -susan ertz
:iconcaroncecilia:
beautiful imagery...you both did very well!! :)

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~Those talked over oft times make the best writers.
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yeah, I'm one of those "I really like this, good job!" critics. So sue me...
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:iconejectionletter:
genius: the sound is
making strangers
of aquaintances


(but acquaintances is spelled wrong!)
:iconyouinventedme:
:D thank you

--
an antique arms and armor expert
:iconyouinventedme:
much obliged!

--
an antique arms and armor expert
:iconyouinventedme:
thanks, love
and thanks for the typo catch
as well

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an antique arms and armor expert

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